My responce to The Arrow Maker story

Well first off i don't want to be the one getting shot for not speaking up. That's why I'm making this blog and writing about the story right now. I think that the arrow maker was smart because he thought up a way to figure out who his enemies were, and because he could make arrows with his teeth. His Way of communicating and making the other person speak up was smart because even if the enemy knew his language the arrow maker would know the enemy is not his friend. The arrow maker would know this because the enemy would not name himself even if he knew the language because the arrow maker would know that the the enemy did not respond as a friend so he must be an enemy and be shot. Another thing that was smart was how the arrow maker kept talking at a normal tone so it would sound like the arrow maker didn't know anything was happening. Anyone who doesn't know the arrow maker's language would have no idea that something was going on and would get shot without knowing what had happened. I also think the arrow maker was smart just for noticing someone outside of his tent.

I think that making a blog and writing things that everyone can see is a lot like the arrow maker story except for that even if u get speak up u might be shot down because of how embarrassed u are that other people are reading what u wrote no matter how excellent or crappy it may be. i think that making a blog is a good way to get constructive criticism and can definitely help u with your writing. I don't think im the greatest writer or anything but i hope u like my blog anyways and i really hope speaking up will keep me from getting shot down.